space

[cacian]

the space
between us
creates
a vacuum of waste
it is unable to detect
which direction to take
right
left
middle or straight
and remains an abyss
in which darkness
lavish
until erasure to a crevice
aligns and forms a travis
it releases the thorn
and a message is born
closeness is passage.

[tailor STATELY]

Enjoyed this poem very much cacian, especially the beginning and last line.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

[cacian]

tailor STATELY thank you :)

[kiz_paws]

Well done, cacian. Enjoyed very much.

[fudgetusk]

Nice. What's a travis?

[cacian]

Well done, cacian. Enjoyed very much.

Thank you Kiz_paws. :)

[cacian]

Nice. What's a travis?

Thank you fudgetusk and travis is this:
I quote:


''Travis is mainly an English masculine given name of French origin. It is derived from the word "traverser" or "to cross", and was given to toll collectors who stood by a bridge or crossing.''