a poem of DorothyHernandez

[DorothyHernande]

Very barren
The redness of the sunlight
Sand queen
Only kiss and smile
The beach ran scared
The golden mile.

It is desperate
Heart wheezing
This chilled and salty air
This silly boy
Look deep gray ocean.

[kiz_paws]

Shame on "Dorothy"

I have withdrawn my original response due to an act of plagiarism...

[Jerrybaldy]

Didn’t I pretty much write this some time back?

[Jerrybaldy]

Didn’t I pretty much write this some time back?

[Jerrybaldy]

What’s going on here?

[Jerrybaldy]

Why are you reposting a bastardised version of something I posted a year or two three back? I don’t get it.

[Jerrybaldy]

Why are you reposting a bastardised version of something I posted a year or two three back? I don’t get it.

[Jerrybaldy]

Go and plagiarise elsewhere

[Jerrybaldy]

I will now repost what you have copied. It's called a poem by Jerrybaldy. Not Dorothy Hernandez.

[Danik 2016]

The original is much better of course.

I should ask the mods to take it out.

If you don´t succeed, I would regard it as a very awkward homage.

[Jerrybaldy]

Come tell your story Dorothy Hernandez. You have nothing to lose

[Jerrybaldy]

Nobody is going to attack you. If you fear words on a screen. I’d love to know what inspired you to bother. You took time and effort to post. Please reply.