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MystyrMystyry
09-04-2018, 06:22 PM
Slug

What a sad excuse!
They say but for the grace of God
And yes so thankful I be
But pondering now, it's just so odd

I mean just look!
So slimy, so legless so armless
What's the point of you??
But hey at least you're harmless

So slithering slow
With shiny trail of revulsion
An elongated blob
Like a self contained avulsion

At least unaware
Of your unfortunate misfortune
Because if you knew
You'd have stayed in the ocean

What purpose
For a creature such as you
No neck! No head!
Looking like a streak of poo!

I suppose though
That you don't criticize me
So I should leave off
And go brew a pot of tea

tailor STATELY
09-05-2018, 11:35 AM
And better this
than grab a shaker of salt
and pour it liberally
to create a tortuous gestalt

Thanks MM !

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

tailor STATELY
09-05-2018, 11:35 AM
dooblequet

kiz_paws
09-06-2018, 01:53 PM
I enjoyed this reflection, MM!

MystyrMystyry
10-02-2018, 03:05 AM
Thankyou Tailor :)

MystyrMystyry
10-02-2018, 03:06 AM
Thankyou Kiz_paws :)

Shadowlight
11-06-2018, 01:31 PM
LOL, I love this! Its fun and witty and subtly teaches the lesson of realizing one's judgement is all a matter of one's perception. Perhaps, best than to not be too critical of one another and just mind your own darn business!