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cacian
07-29-2018, 09:28 AM
life is sweet
and
even when bitter
it sugar tweets
aroma triggers
honey sliver
writers in their vigour
composers with their anthems
fall all over their
figure
to hear it speak
life is a dialogue
with sketches
till spectrum stretches
free will sniggers
it ain't worth a sticker
kiz_paws
07-31-2018, 09:21 AM
Enjoyed this poem... the words literally dance! :)
cacian
07-31-2018, 01:12 PM
Enjoyed this poem... the words literally dance! :)
kiz paws thank you for the lovely feedback :)
cacian
07-31-2018, 01:13 PM
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tailor STATELY
07-31-2018, 04:21 PM
I enjoyed the word play in your poem too (especially S1) but S3 tripped me up for some reason (free will)... still bending my poor interpretative skills around it:
• life is a dialogue with sketches till spectrum stretches free will (snigger)
it ain't worth a sticker (life?)
• life is a dialogue with sketches till spectrum stretches
free will (snigger) it ain't worth a sticker
But, as with any poem, meanings ebb and flow with time and circumstance... and I can over-think just about anything.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
tailor STATELY
07-31-2018, 04:21 PM
double post bug
cacian
08-01-2018, 06:13 AM
Thank you tailor STATELY for reading and feedback. I see what you mean about S3. ;)
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