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DRayVan
07-21-2018, 11:13 AM
winter’s fierce winds
landscape’s embrace
white snow blankets
fall’s bounty

slim pickings for feathered friends

feeder sporting
seeds aplenty
magnetic attraction
from all compass points

wrens, sparrows, and a chickadee or two

an obnoxious blue jay
pushy, boisterous, rowdy
a timid house finch
ignores them all

a red-coated fellow waits

opportunity knocks
zooms, plucks a seed
a crimson streak, vanishes
the northern cardinal

again, this knightly bloke whooshes in

he’s undeterred
takes a choice morsel
alights a nearby limb
Sir Red, I dubbed thee

this Templar visits the feeder’s cache

day after day
departing as
swiftly as arriving
to a lady cardinal, waiting

he shares the spoils

caring for his mate
true devotion
Her Ladyship
I christen thee

winter’s cold yields to spring’s warmth

Sir Red’s songs proclaimed
his presence
his territory
his lady love

sunshine days and shorter nights

nesting fever abounds
Sir Red’s feeding forays increase
bringing food to Her Ladyship
brooding a clutch of eggs

treetop acapella echoes afar

chicks born this day
rejoice with us, rejoice
the bringer of life
this lady, my love

their season’s work now done

together at the feeder
still sharing
still caring
God’s perfect example

summer’s last week fading

Sir Red flies in, alone
stays, feeds, and leaves
Her Ladyship
nowhere seen

his songs have changed

but their meaning escapes me
what is he singing, is he singing?
week after week
he comes without her

fall erupts, its full splendor on display

wrens, sparrows, and finches galore
but Sir Red doesn’t come any more
was his song a lament for Her Ladyship lost?
I think is was

I hope he’s looking for another lady

I miss them both
they brought me joy and
taught me the meaning of true devotion
I wish him well

kiz_paws
07-22-2018, 06:20 PM
What a wonderful ode to nature.
Really enjoyed it. Some of the lines written were gorgeous.

tonywalt
07-23-2018, 12:05 PM
loved it. Ted Hughey

Shadowlight
08-02-2018, 06:45 PM
"I hope he’s looking for another lady"

I do too.

DRayVan
11-27-2020, 07:30 AM
He is, I'm sure.