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DRayVan
07-19-2018, 07:48 AM
the day he most
dreaded had arrived
sorting through memories
would not be easy

they’d been
so close for
many years
now she was gone

and he had to move on

he looked at her clothes
hanging in the closet
he remembered how
beautiful she looked in this and that

she never went anywhere without a “proper” outfit
sorting through her things
rekindled memories of
more pleasant times

her perfume still
clung to her clothing,
awakening forgotten
memories of better times

he held a dress in a tight embrace,
it was a special date together
a dress, a sweater, a top, the scent of her
lingered and sparked fond memories

shoes, he never understood
why a person needed so many shoes
scarves for every occasion
how could he sort through them alone?

jewelry to complement every outfit
how she knew what to wear was a mystery to him
makeup to accent her lush lips and highlight her blue eyes
where did she learn this skill?

it all had to go
keeping it was
too painful, but
how could he?

would his memories of
her and the good times
fade?
he hoped not

would the memories of the
pain and suffering she endured
fade?
he hoped so

they were the last memories of her
they’d rocked him to his soul
he struggled to blot them out
but failed

yet sorting through her things
aroused memories of better times,
when she was full of life,
when they were happy together

then he knew he could do this
his good memories of her
would not fade
today was not so dreadful after all

tailor STATELY
07-19-2018, 08:21 AM
Very nice poem and sentiment. My only quibble is with the word "memories" being perhaps overutilized (9).

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

kiz_paws
07-19-2018, 01:34 PM
A sad but lovely poem.

and if this is something that you had to endure, then you have shared this beautifully and eloquently. Peace, K♥zzo

Dreamwoven
07-21-2018, 10:39 AM
I like this piece of writing, but I can't post anywhere else, for some reason everywhere else it doesn't accept my posting. What does K❤︎zzo mean?

kiz_paws
07-22-2018, 06:22 PM
I like this piece of writing, but I can't post anywhere else, for some reason everywhere else it doesn't accept my posting. What does K❤︎zzo mean?Oh, that is just a 'take' on my sign-in name that I sometimes use. (Kiz_Paws … K♥z … K♥zzo) etc. My name is actually Karalynne, though.