Shutter butter

[edgarricerice]

On my head, John. I was walking along
the road. I sometimes think I am calling
a bat a bat. I wanted to get out of Chicago.
There was a mouse called mad Richard.
I would like to get a job. I had no skills.
I was good leaving. I wanted to get kisses.
They thought I was a little bit angry. I was
sent to Coventry. I wanted to call myself a
happy

JOHN!

[cacian]

hello edgarricerie and welcome to the forum

shutter butter I am taking is a play on words/

I noticed your style of writing which is unusual .
It is like paraphrasing and there is a jump one thought to the next not necessarily related?!

I like these lines the best


I would like to get a job. I had no skills.
I was good leaving. I wanted to get kisses.
They thought I was a little bit angry. I was
sent to Coventry. I wanted to call myself a
happy

well done :)
and is that your name John?

[Jerrybaldy]

No idea what it was but I definitely enjoyed reading it.