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cacian
06-22-2018, 10:37 AM
an obstacle
is a comment
on how a feeling
is willing to
bend
all directions expense
to breach and blend
weakness
the end
is strength
with a slang
nothing to lose but expend
or life is a strand
lost on clues because
reality a land of trial
is full of proofs.

tailor STATELY
06-22-2018, 01:59 PM
Enjoyed your poem cacian.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

cacian
06-23-2018, 01:18 PM
STATELY thank you :)