Eraser

[Jerrybaldy]

I was scented Japanese
You had mascara
And fire damaged knees
Melted skin
We ate chips and drank gin
I bit your neck
Before you could begin
To stutter your name
You were scented English rose
And weed killer
Tasted of summer grass
And ice cream vanilla
We swam in the pond
With lily pads and beer cans
Nearly drowned
But id found you
And when we f ucked
Beneath the stars
To the radio songs of passing cars
You called his name not mine
So I rubbed your melted knees
Made out all was fine.
Walking home alone
I erased you from my mind.

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Good Jerrybaldy
I enjoyed your poem .... it includes many dancing words .....So I rubbed your melted knees
And it has a good end ... Erased you from my mind = that you're satisfied in what happened across the journey

[Jerrybaldy]

Thank you Mohammad. I think this one is ok

[kiz_paws]

Ahem... Jerry, this poem is more than ok.
Loved it!

[tonywalt]

Loved it. the words rolled across the page and the reader follows them, transported.

[Shadowlight]

Every time I come to this forum, I re-read this one! So, I believe it is time I comment.

"Ouch" what a low blow to such a lovely mingle. Reminds me of the rebound effect. A person who hasn't fully recuperated from a breakup and is lying to themselves as well as the rebound on the intention of the date. If it was all clear and spoken out loud how it would hurt the person.