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cacian
05-28-2018, 07:04 AM
beneath the great
whites of the light
it is dim the path
of the right
left is for the might

for the the future
straight ahead is ruder
the belief that what is coming
is bleak
is endemic of a mind weak

a new approach slightly cruder
to none directions closer propose
it is systematic an image
emblematic
let it beckons
until dealing with it reckons
it is not what happens but
how it does not

M Kirkpatrick
05-28-2018, 09:38 AM
beneath the great
whites of the light
it is dim the path
of the right
left is for the might

for the the future
straight ahead is ruder
the belief that what is coming
is bleak
is endemic of a mind weak

a new approach slightly cruder
to none directions closer propose
it is systematic an image
emblematic
let it beckons
until dealing with it reckons
it is not what happens but
how it does not

Enjoyed this poem cacian, thanks.
Regards Michael.

cacian
05-29-2018, 12:25 PM
Kirk thank you :)