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cacian
05-25-2018, 02:22 PM
the sunshine
claims
where there is hides
there is life

darkeness is a
tide for the stars
to pass through and light
to a sparkle that is bright
not a diamond in sight

dark blue is for the sky to spread
slight
and
dawn to idolise
tones revatilise
billions of rays
in gold threads
in and out of clouds red
the land awakes glad

it is miraculous
how
nebulous
materialises
fabulous
it is the movement of
immaculate

M Kirkpatrick
05-25-2018, 03:12 PM
the sunshine
claims
where there is hides
there is life

darkeness is a
tide for the stars
to pass through and light
to a sparkle that is bright
not a diamond in sight

blue is for the sky to spread
slight
and
dawn to idolise
tones revatilise
billions of rays
in gold thread
in and out of clouds red
the land awakes glad

it is fabulous
time
miraculous
what materialises
nebulous
it is the movement of
immaculate

Great poem cacian, likeyour work.
regards Michael.