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cacian
05-23-2018, 03:05 PM
an experience
is a life
design

with an exterior
to attract
inferior to achieve
superior
and a range of
feelings race to achieve
euphoria

an interior
is made to remind
one needs to explore the meanings of resign
in case of failure

to play is
to win but with losing
made a liar
the end may never expire

romance may take
love to mean
roses are red
but the game is the same

the premise that
tomorrow is to live
is to wish
endless possibilities
a miss

infinity denying
time
is better reliant
and always implying:
when nothing is left worth applying
trying is the science it is
the genius of defiance.

M Kirkpatrick
05-23-2018, 04:47 PM
an experience
is a life
design

with an exterior
to attract
inferior to achieve
superior
and a range of
feelings race to achieve
euphoria

an interior
is made to remind
one needs to explore the meanings of resign
in case of failure

to play is
to win but with losing
made a liar
the end may never expire

romance may take
love to mean
roses are red
but the game is the same

the premise that
tomorrow is to live
is to wish
endless possibilities
a miss

infinity denying
time
is better reliant
and always implying:
when nothing is left worth applying
trying is the science it is
the genius of defiance.

Enjoyed reading your poem cacian, experiences precede the verse.
warmest regards Michael.

cacian
05-24-2018, 01:53 PM
Michael thank you for reading :)