finest

[cacian]

the splendor of nature
it indicates
no traitor but a treat
to console defeat
humans encounter in
deceipt

the sun shines through
blue skies high
so to look up
is a feeling one
must rev up
to releave fed up

and the moon
beams through darkness
in realms finest
one must instigate heartless
to reach harmless

nature's longevity is
to resolve
a friendly indemnity
if eternity is to evolve
because
quitting is dissolve

[M Kirkpatrick]

the splendor of nature
it indicates
no traitor but a treat
to console defeat
humans encounter in
deceipt

the sun shines through
blue skies high
so to look up
is a feeling one
must rev up
to releave fed up

and the moon
beams through darkness
in realms finest
one must instigate heartless
to reach harmless

nature's longevity is
to resolve
a friendly indemnity
if eternity is to evolve
because
quitting is dissolve

Beautiful poem cacian Personal experience shines through.
Warmest regards Michael.

[Danik 2016]

You get to the point, cacian!

[PeterL]

Just like you, positively beautiful.

[Pompey Bum]

Salut, ma cherie! So nice to see you again. Your poem is dazzling comme d'habitude (just the opposite of my French!)

[cacian]

Kirkpatrick ,Danik,Peter and Pompey thank you so very much for the positive and lovely comments.:)