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tonywalt
05-06-2018, 02:09 PM
A man with not much to lose,
searching purpose, island hopping in his sailboat to

somewhere,

ran into a storm and docked at a small Caribbean island
about 2 miles in length populated by about
a thousand islanders - mostly fishermen. It had clean streets,
tidy New England style clapboard houses, cozy pubs and a
blue-green lagoon with fishing boats sleepily nodding in the
water. He docked the sailboat and wandered into the
pub close by, ordered beer and grilled fish and watched the
rain falling through the porthole window
The grilled fish was fresh and light and the beer cold
The fishermen in the pub seemed unhurried, with quiet eyes
They bantered with the bartender in a cool pleasant way that
seemed unfamiliar to the man - it echoed a
simpler time and place. The waitress was pleasant and attractive
with a clean laugh.

He finished the meal and drank another beer while
listening to the rain pattering on the tin roof - cocooned by
blue seas and thought:
I should stay here.

But the storm passed and the fishermen got
back on their boats.
And as if by nature: The man returned to his sailboat,
undid the lines and sailed away slowly, listening to
gentle waves washing against the boat.
He never looked back to this small island, but
wondered why he did not stay there.

Danik 2016
05-06-2018, 05:02 PM
Enjoyed your narrative poem, Tony!

cacian
05-07-2018, 05:40 AM
a great piece much enjoyed. :)
never been to the Caribbean but i know from the media and people that it is an incredible place !!

kiz_paws
05-10-2018, 09:28 AM
A man with not much to lose,
searching purpose, island hopping in his sailboat to

somewhere,

ran into a storm and docked at a small Caribbean island
about 2 miles in length populated by about
a thousand islanders - mostly fishermen. It had clean streets,
tidy New England style clapboard houses, cozy pubs and a
blue-green lagoon with fishing boats sleepily nodding in the
water. He docked the sailboat and wandered into the
pub close by, ordered beer and grilled fish and watched the
rain falling through the porthole window
The grilled fish was fresh and light and the beer cold
The fishermen in the pub seemed unhurried, with quiet eyes
They bantered with the bartender in a cool pleasant way that
seemed unfamiliar to the man - it echoed a
simpler time and place. The waitress was pleasant and attractive
with a clean laugh.

He finished the meal and drank another beer while
listening to the rain pattering on the tin roof - cocooned by
blue seas and thought:
I should stay here.

But the storm passed and the fishermen got
back on their boats.
And as if by nature: The man returned to his sailboat,
undid the lines and sailed away slowly, listening to
gentle waves washing against the boat.
He never looked back to this small island, but
wondered why he did not stay there.Tony, how beautiful. I really loved this work!