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cacian
05-04-2018, 03:52 PM
the moon
the stars
they conduct the spark
that lights up the stark
so life goes on
undark

deity piety
they startle the fact
humans are by far
the design of a higher
their beginning starts
when their ends expire
time is their only desire.
kiz_paws
05-05-2018, 03:43 PM
Beautiful, Cacian!
M Kirkpatrick
05-05-2018, 08:57 PM
Great poem Cacian, I feel that we will be competing for best poet of the year, in a contest!


warmest regards Michael.
cacian
05-06-2018, 01:34 PM
kiz paws thank you for reading :)
M Kirkpatrik thank you and yes!!! WE MUST COMPETE you never know that is the beauty of writing it gives you opportunities such as this:biggrin5:
tonywalt
05-06-2018, 02:08 PM
Love it, great imagery
M Kirkpatrick
05-06-2018, 03:13 PM
kiz paws thank you for reading :)
M Kirkpatrik thank you and yes!!! WE MUST COMPETE you never know that is the beauty of writing it gives you opportunities such as this:biggrin5:

To compete is up my street, I am the best, the elite!!!
Thanks for this,will not miss.
Warmest regards michael.
cacian
05-07-2018, 05:38 AM
Love it, great imagery

Tony thank you.