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M Kirkpatrick
05-02-2018, 11:44 AM
Cast out of motionless womb
seals unexpressed opened.

Darkness flowing like a mighty river
Light receding like a forgotten dream.

The sound of silence fills all
with a deafening trill.

Nothing is leading to nowhere
an opening void, bids welcome.

Come into this emptiness and
fill it with nothing.

Pressure mounts upon the formless one
its flowing state becomes entangled.

Fear is recast into reborn hope
the shadow grows smaller.

Closing in on a distant shore
blessings float by, unnoticed.

A golden glow beckons
in as rising hope.

Warmest regards Michael.

kiz_paws
05-05-2018, 03:28 PM
I loved the flow of this poem... thank you, Michael.

M Kirkpatrick
05-05-2018, 06:17 PM
I loved the flow of this poem... thank you, Michael.

Thank you so much kiz paws its so nice to get back feedback, will write some more!

Warmest regards Michael.