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Jerrybaldy
05-01-2018, 05:49 PM
Like a dairy cow. All milk expressed
And drank and poured on cornflakes
With electrodes to the brain
Like a weed amidst marigolds
Sucking goodness from the rain
A nettle sting with no dock leaf
To anesthetise that pain
An egg with no chicken
Greasy finger licking. Like
A bull full of s hit
Like you loved me
Yes you did
A little bit
What on earth is true
The dairy cow went moo.
Before it died
All dowey eyed
We care for those we know
That’s the way it goe
s.

kiz_paws
05-05-2018, 03:21 PM
Like a dairy cow. All milk expressed
And drank and poured on cornflakes
With electrodes to the brain
Like a weed amidst marigolds
Sucking goodness from the rain
A nettle sting with no dock leaf
To anesthetise that pain
An egg with no chicken
Greasy finger licking. Like
A bull full of s hit
Like you loved me
Yes you did
A little bit
What on earth is true
The dairy cow went moo.
Before it died
All dowey eyed
We care for those we know
That’s the way it goe
s.Really enjoyed this poem, Jerry. Love how you weave your words...

Jerrybaldy
05-08-2018, 05:41 PM
Thanks kiz. I still like this one

M Kirkpatrick
05-08-2018, 06:53 PM
Thanks jerrybaldy, liked your poem, seems like I have competition in the poetic stakes, may the best man win.

Warmest regards Michael.

Jerrybaldy
05-09-2018, 12:26 PM
Thanks Michael. I’m not the competitive type. You can have the win :thumbsup: