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M Kirkpatrick
05-01-2018, 10:47 AM
The wind fans the grass,like a
thousand tiny fingers,the
fragrance of the dew all
around us it lingers
Is it really you?

A rainbow arches high above
a dim reminder of forgotten
love.
Is it really you?

A shaft of sunlight on a
spiders web
lonely feelings, begin to ebb
Is it really you?

The cawing of a winters crow
spotting food on the frozen
ground below
Is it really you?

Warmest regards Michael.

Dreamwoven
05-01-2018, 11:36 AM
This is very nice. Thank you, Michael

M Kirkpatrick
05-01-2018, 02:24 PM
This is very nice. Thank you, Michael

Thanks for your kind words.
Regards Michael.

Jerrybaldy
05-01-2018, 06:01 PM
I enjoyed reading. Hoping you is a person and not some useless god.

M Kirkpatrick
05-01-2018, 06:37 PM
I enjoyed reading. Hoping you is a person and not some useless god.

Yes I am a real being Jerrybaldy, and thanks for liking my poem,I was a person for most of my life, then discovered a living soul within.

Warmest regards Michael.

kiz_paws
05-05-2018, 03:25 PM
The wind fans the grass,like a
thousand tiny fingers,the
fragrance of the dew all
around us it lingers
Is it really you?

A rainbow arches high above
a dim reminder of forgotten
love.
Is it really you?

A shaft of sunlight on a
spiders web
lonely feelings, begin to ebb
Is it really you?

The cawing of a winters crow
spotting food on the frozen
ground below
Is it really you?

Warmest regards Michael.Beautifully written.

M Kirkpatrick
05-05-2018, 06:20 PM
Thanks again kiz paws, you make my day brighter with your interest.

Warmest regards Michael.

tonywalt
05-06-2018, 02:44 PM
Exquisite

M Kirkpatrick
05-06-2018, 03:17 PM
Exquisite

Many thanks for your kind word, better than saying its absurd!

Warmest regards michael.