Family Is Everything

[darthv1234]

I don't know much about rhyme scheme or meter or anything like that. So i would appreciate any input you have for me. So Please be honest with you're opinion and share you're perspective of how you interpret it. Thanks!


In times frenzied with anguish, all we have is those in blood.
Boiling, is their blood, filled with a hastened rage.
It cools with the scent of bitter apologies.
Never to truly forget.
In the end, the precedent of love will hold dominion.
Rage will subside.
But it's stain will forever resonate.
And its servants, adhere.

[Dreamwoven]

I liked this part best:
"It cools with the scent of bitter apologies.
Never to truly forget."

But also the rest of the piece, especially:

"the precedent of love will hold dominion."

"Rage will subside.
But its stain will forever resonate.

[kiz_paws]

I really enjoyed this powerful poem. :)