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Shadowlight
02-18-2018, 02:04 AM
Pray tell your secrets only repeated to hell
And unearth the demons
Of your angels that fell.
Reveal to me your inner vulnerability,
And find within, a forgiven purity.
Breathe in me the truth of your deeds
To wash the sins that had you fallen upon your knees.
Confide in whispers the screams of your soul
Forever to echo a promise to make whole.
Show me your darkness
So I may show you the light
That only those who have walked the shadows
May receive with enlightened sight.

kiz_paws
02-18-2018, 08:40 PM
I liked this, Shadow. :)

Jerrybaldy
02-22-2018, 07:19 PM
Felt it was written in the constraints of the required rhyme. It’s always an issue if the rhyme or the message is at the helm.