The Star Child

[TheRichestMorty]

It would mean the world to me if you read this super short story on wattpad and gave me some critique! Thanks!



https://www.wattpad.com/530610171-when-you%27re-ready

[kiz_paws]

I would say that you are off to a very good start.
I liked your writing style.

[fudgetusk]

Fun read. I like a bit of comic book fantasy. Probably won't find many who do here. Well written. Good sentence structure. Can't judge on plot though. That's down to a future publisher. :)
One mistake, I think: . "Ugh," he moaned and messaged his forehead.
Messaged? or massaged. Hard to tell with fantasy.

[WallaceStVincen]

Hey y'all, this site wont let me post a new thread but please check out this little vignette I wrote for a new series, I love feedback!

https://www.wattpad.com/568949249-the-blue-barista