Heart shaped.

[Jerrybaldy]

I love you with all my heart
Every leaking ventricle,
The caked up arteries
Like sugar lined
Tunnels of love,
The heaving sexuality
Of the pump
Orgasmic flexing
Monotonous
Until it’s last.
Aorta
F ucking you with
New life
Vena cava
Bringing it all home.
My leaky
Clogged up heart.
Best of all
My cholesterol
Is raised
Up high
For
You.
For you. For you
For you
I have fatty blood for you.
My dear.
Lardy chip fat
Heart shaped globules
For you.

[Delta40]

Great poem - that's what it's all about now. Love like the Hokey Pokey x

[kiz_paws]

I love you with all my heart
Every leaking ventricle,
The caked up arteries
Like sugar lined
Tunnels of love,
The heaving sexuality
Of the pump
Orgasmic flexing
Monotonous
Until it’s last.
Aorta
F ucking you with
New life
Vena cava
Bringing it all home.
My leaky
Clogged up heart.
Best of all
My cholesterol
Is raised
Up high
For
You.
For you. For you
For you
I have fatty blood for you.
My dear.
Lardy chip fat
Heart shaped globules
For you.I absolutely loved this poem.
"They" say that all the love poems in the world have already been written and that trying to compete would be clichee....Then, along comes Jerry.
Woo Hoo, you go!! :)

[tonywalt]

God, how I love it. The lean writing of bukowski and the talent of Jerrry

[fudgetusk]

Nice work. A love poem and a health assessment.

[Shadowlight]

I imagine this is a love poem to a bag of potato chips. A love affair destined to end in tragedy!