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Ganthradorius
01-09-2018, 01:05 PM
A pale grey
That clings to our day
No reason to care
Along our dreary fare
Beyond the horizon we look
Towards a story book
A way to see ourselves
In the life of fairy tales
Our faces shining
Towards a silver lining
Though once more
Life is a chore
We put down the book
For another grey look

Ganthradorius
01-09-2018, 01:16 PM
Confusion

A choice
A decision
One moment
Infinite futures
Infinite outcomes
Beyond the realm of your own thought
Yet so simple
Focus on the multitude of outcomes?
No
Realize reality
Yet reality is full of potential results
Fear the worst
No
Hope for the best
No
Know what will realistically happen
Yes
What will realistically happen?
The worst and the best and in between
The best choice?
Not making one

Ganthradorius
01-09-2018, 01:19 PM
Love

Is this love?
Have you known love?
Is love different from person to person?
If it is what is "true" love?
True love is caring beyond variance
Love is relative to the individual
I still don't know

kiz_paws
01-09-2018, 04:41 PM
I like how the latter two poems pose a question.
Interesting thoughts and I liked how they were presented.

emerson1999
01-10-2018, 02:14 AM
Very well done poems. I especially like the repetition in "Confusion", the syntax really matches up well with the topic.