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jurisprudent
01-08-2018, 05:04 PM
December, the sky is black, sometimes grey.
December, the wind whirls and tells stories of coldness.
December, light gathers around Christmas Eve.
December says time is up.
December says the end is coming and is here.
December walked me into the most beautiful room.
The dark veils on the walls fell to the ground
And I could walk around and touch the gold, the crystal glass and the mirrors.
And a hand caught my hand and we were in love.
December, you opened the door to the most sacred room
And walked me in
And slammed the door behind my back
Then said time is up
Then kicked me out
December, you left me wreathing on the floor
Past the end
December, you are a killer. Bloodthirsty killer.
tailor STATELY
01-08-2018, 06:08 PM
Remember December
December, the sky is black, sometimes grey.
December, the wind whirls and tells stories of coldness.
December, light gathers around Christmas Eve.
December says time is up.
December says the end is coming and is here.
December walked me into the most beautiful room.
The dark veils on the walls fell to the ground
And I could walk around and touch the gold, the crystal glass and the mirrors.
And a hand caught my hand and we were in love.
December, you opened the door to the most sacred room
And walked me in
And slammed the door behind my back
Then said time is up
Then kicked me out
December, you left me wreathing on the floor
Past the end
December, you are a killer. Bloodthirsty killer.
Enjoyed, but one quibble: Google: https://www.google.com/search?num=100&newwindow=1&safe=active&client=opera&ei=lupTWtD6NYHd0AStt7SoDg&q=wreathing&oq=wreathing&gs_l=psy-ab.3...1611.1611.0.2868.1.1.0.0.0.0.0.0..0.0....0. ..1c.1.64.psy-ab..1.0.0....0.behTE3wjfAk
wreathe rēT͟H/ verb; gerund or present participle: wreathing
1.
cover, surround, or encircle (something).
"he sits wreathed in smoke"
synonyms: festoon, garland, drape, cover, bedeck, deck, decorate, ornament, adorn
"a pulpit wreathed in holly"
literary
twist or entwine (something flexible) around or over something.
"shall I once more wreathe my arms about Antonio's neck?"
(especially of smoke) move with a curling motion.
"he watched the smoke wreathe into the night air"
synonyms: spiral, coil, loop, wind, curl, twist, snake, curve
"blue smoke wreathed upward"
2.
form (flowers, leaves, or stems) into a wreath.
... perhaps "writhing" was what you were trying to convey.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
jurisprudent
01-09-2018, 04:21 PM
Indeed, it is "writhing".
So the full text is:
December, the sky is black, sometimes grey.
December, the wind whirls and tells stories of coldness.
December, light gathers around Christmas Eve.
December says time is up.
December says the end is coming and is here.
December walked me into the most beautiful room.
The dark veils on the walls fell to the ground
And I could walk around and touch the gold, the crystal glass and the mirrors.
And a hand caught my hand and we were in love.
December, you opened the door to the most sacred room
And walked me in
And slammed the door behind my back
Then said time is up
Then kicked me out
December, you left me writhing on the floor
Past the end
December, you are a killer. Bloodthirsty killer.
kiz_paws
01-09-2018, 04:39 PM
Indeed, it is "writhing".
So the full text is:
December, the sky is black, sometimes grey.
December, the wind whirls and tells stories of coldness.
December, light gathers around Christmas Eve.
December says time is up.
December says the end is coming and is here.
December walked me into the most beautiful room.
The dark veils on the walls fell to the ground
And I could walk around and touch the gold, the crystal glass and the mirrors.
And a hand caught my hand and we were in love.
December, you opened the door to the most sacred room
And walked me in
And slammed the door behind my back
Then said time is up
Then kicked me out
December, you left me writhing on the floor
Past the end
December, you are a killer. Bloodthirsty killer.I really enjoyed your poem. :)
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