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tonywalt
11-25-2017, 03:02 PM
You do not have to be yielding
You do not have to bow to the powers that be
and march through bogs devouring enemies that are not your own
Just love this journey and even its maddened pace

Tell me about your sadness, yours, and I will tell you sadness, mine
Meanwhile the universe goes on
Meanwhile the days light and the clouds burst with crystals of rain
sweeping across our homes
and over the rivers and deserts

Meanwhile seagulls, high in the clean blue air
are heading home from the sea, again today
Whoever you are, wherever you are, no matter how forsaken,
life offers itself to your own unique invention, yours
and calls you like the sea, rough and intoxicating

listen for its call

kiz_paws
11-25-2017, 04:03 PM
You do not have to be yielding
You do not have to bow to the powers that be
and march through bogs devouring enemies that are not your own
Just love this journey and even it's maddened pace

Tell me about your sadness, yours, and I will tell you sadness, mine
Meanwhile the universe goes on.
Meanwhile the days light and the clouds burst with crystals of rain
sweeping across our homes
and over our rivers and deserts

Meanwhile seagulls, high in the clean blue air
are heading home from the sea, again today
Whoever you are, wherever you are, no matter how forsaken,
life offers itself to your own unique invention, yours
and calls you like the sea, rough and intoxicating

listen for its callMy gawd, Tony, I got misty at those last four lines.
I think that this must be your best poem yet.
Loved it!

tonywalt
11-25-2017, 04:16 PM
My gawd, Tony, I got misty at those last four lines.
I think that this must be your best poem yet.
Loved it!

Thank Kizzo

tailor STATELY
11-25-2017, 09:29 PM
Very nice poem tonywalt... enjoyed.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

YesNo
11-26-2017, 03:57 PM
I liked this phrase "life offers itself to your own unique invention".

tonywalt
11-26-2017, 04:07 PM
I liked this phrase "life offers itself to your own unique invention".

Thanks

tonywalt
11-26-2017, 04:07 PM
Very nice poem tonywalt... enjoyed.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Thanks!