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Jerrybaldy
11-23-2017, 07:49 PM
Hold your doubt close,
Keep it burning,
No matter how small
The ember.
Slaughter belief
Before it grows.
We are idiots, easily fooled.
Only love and doubt are true,
I doubt that too.

tonywalt
11-23-2017, 09:30 PM
I love this. Ambiguity is the best

kiz_paws
11-24-2017, 08:42 AM
Loved that title!
Enjoyed your poem, Jerry. :)

YesNo
11-24-2017, 10:57 AM
I liked the sound and sense of the last two lines.

Jerrybaldy
11-24-2017, 02:14 PM
Thank you tony, Kiz and YesNo. I've edited and tightened.

tonywalt
11-24-2017, 04:39 PM
It’s very Bukowski(esque), who is holy. To me.

Jerrybaldy
11-27-2017, 04:29 PM
Happy to be remotely compared to Bukowski for a second. Cheers Tony