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S.A.M.
11-14-2017, 04:09 AM
Knowledge is intractable
Like loss, or like fire

Minds are things so fallible
Mistresses to ire

What is light without darkness?
A blinding life’s mare

Damaged goods are witnesses
To unearthed terror

A man broke amid the day
He seemed so contrite

Beaten by the sun’s hot ray,
He began to ignite

Bored into whilst withering,
By a brother’s eye

May the night spread its mercy
In my final time

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Don’t roast me too hard.

kiz_paws
11-14-2017, 10:54 AM
I enjoyed your poem, S.A.M.
It reads well. :)

S.A.M.
11-22-2017, 07:31 PM
I enjoyed your poem, S.A.M.
It reads well. :)

I've been so occupied lately, I never got around to thanking you. I'm glad I didn't disappoint! Thanks for reading.