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tonywalt
10-27-2017, 08:10 PM
Lying here imagining what would happen if
we wound back to that Time and Place and
met all over again?
And you knew it was me
and
I knew it was you:

Would we talk about why it didn't work?

I doubt it, for we are not yet wise enough
to speak of such matters.
We are younger, slimmer, less gray -
which, and it must be said, is akin to
gaining your sight back - only better.

Now there we are chatting in the blue July air
with the gentle idleness of summer grass. You are
cooled by my contemplative calm and I warm in your
blood-raw light.

Or maybe we are like veterans at a war
reunion - survivors of each other. Speaking
of future shared horrors: battles won and
lost.

Hell - we could screw, argue, have a Mexican
marriage, or split.


But wait - I notice the way your lower lip
drops and you raise your eyebrows ever so
slightly when telling a joke. And how your
crushed diamond eyes cut through my eminence front.

Truth is - I've been watching your lure all
evening from afar as you go about spawning gardens
from the soles of your feet.

So what happens later: well, it gets my full attention.



It's odd isn't it? That long look back to see
where our choices are born.

But time is a thief and it never gets caught.

Anyway - with our damn luck the clock would strike
12 and the spell would broken as in some
Cinderella fable.

"Fairy Godmother, give me one more hour"

kiz_paws
10-28-2017, 08:47 AM
You are
cooled by my contemplative calm and I warm in your
blood-raw light.Loved it!
Truth is - I've been watching your lure all
evening from afar as you go about spawning gardens
from the soles of your feet.Beautiful!
But time is a thief and it never gets caught.Loved it!

There is a lot to be said of the poem, I really enjoyed the whole painting, if you will. ;)

tonywalt
10-28-2017, 11:45 AM
Loved it!Beautiful!Loved it!

There is a lot to be said of the poem, I really enjoyed the whole painting, if you will. ;)

Thanks Kizzo!