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tonywalt
10-15-2017, 07:48 PM
Walking alone one windless June night
fear looked at the clock and asked,
"So, was there love or no love,
and what or who is to blame?"

Ah - Indifference.
Though born of love,
it has no lover, circling slowly,
patiently with dull eyes,
peering below at the growing
empty spaces between words,
then plunging down

scattering swirls of feathers,
leaving hope bewildered and blinking back
a million tears of rain falling on the
upturned face of the sea.

But so you emerge with quiet eyes and
draw the curtains to a rain fresh morning and
the surf smooths out the new pages of white sands.
And the soft roar of the day
begins.

Danik 2016
10-15-2017, 08:38 PM
Enjoyed that poem a lot, Tony!

tonywalt
10-16-2017, 12:15 AM
Enjoyed that poem a lot, Tony!

Thanks!

kiz_paws
10-16-2017, 05:04 PM
So many phrases that are brilliant. I mean that. BRILLIANT. :)

YesNo
10-17-2017, 10:56 AM
I liked this line: "leaving hope bewildered and blinking back"

tonywalt
10-17-2017, 11:01 AM
So many phrases that are brilliant. I mean that. BRILLIANT. :)

Thanks!