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cacian
09-29-2017, 06:20 PM
poetry sings
when it strings
notes of a similar ring
it has the voices of a king
everyone wants to be
the hymn

and it linger
when it does not hear a ringer
it goes off to a gig
pretending to be a stringer
everyone wants to try it
but no one wants to buy it

musical is for those who want
audible but with the quiet
too loud and it is a riot

Danik 2016
09-30-2017, 07:47 AM
Loved specially the first verse, cacian.

And it is true that:
"everyone wants to try it
but no one wants to buy it"

kiz_paws
09-30-2017, 08:57 AM
I liked the flow, cacian. :)

tonywalt
10-07-2017, 12:32 PM
Beautifully written Cacian. Your still here, and Kiz Paws. I miss the ole days though. This place hopped and swung.

Melanie
10-07-2017, 03:31 PM
I liked "everyone wants to be the hymn". Well done cacian!