Rezanoff Drive

[CloudDweller]

I wrote this story over the last month and I am looking to get some critical feedback.

Rezanoff Drivehttps://clouddweller.wordpress.com/2017/08/31/rezanoff-drive/

[kiz_paws]

I have nothing to critical to say regarding your story.
I enjoyed it, it flowed well and I felt I could identify with the protagonist.
Well done, CD.

[CloudDweller]

Thank you! I appreciate the read.

[RobertoRomello]

I wrote this story over the last month and I am looking to get some critical feedback.

Rezanoff Drivehttps://clouddweller.wordpress.com/2017/08/31/rezanoff-drive/

Hey, it is really a nice story... I enjoyed reading it very much. Also, I liked your recent story https://clouddweller.wordpress.com/2017/09/27/three-poems/ which is short & sharp... thank you!

[dagger2255]

Just a note to say I enjoyed the story. Great job of conveying the melancholy feelings of the character. On a side note, I also enjoyed the details concerning the church and the imaging provided.