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lawrencelpy
09-14-2017, 01:11 PM
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kiz_paws
09-14-2017, 09:23 PM
I absolutely LOVED your story.
Very well done indeed, bravo, my friend. :thumbsup:
lawrencelpy
09-15-2017, 01:24 AM
I absolutely LOVED your story.
Very well done indeed, bravo, my friend. :thumbsup:

haha I have more to offer.
YesNo
09-15-2017, 09:22 AM
Nice lesson beginning where it ends but better off.
lawrencelpy
09-15-2017, 12:23 PM
Nice lesson beginning where it ends but better off.

What exactly do you mean by better off?
Danik 2016
09-15-2017, 05:02 PM
A very clever parable! Congrats!

You canīt write "citizen" without "z". So when "z" is banned, citizenship is also banished.
Melanie
09-16-2017, 04:39 AM
Excellent personification of a very original idea, lawrencelpy! One of my favorite lines was "I am no longer arrogant. I accept X, Y and Z. I especially love Y, as I love you." Your first paragraph mirrored your last paragraph...a nice tidy set of bookends to hold your "English town of citizens" together.