realia

[cacian]

romance is
hopeless
when it turns
pointless
feelings
gather pace
at a moment race
love
is a talent worth
a place
it challenges radical
to turn
realia
it is the perfect
doze for any failure

[Danik 2016]

I couldn´t agree more to the beginning of your poem, cacian. But I´m not sure about the end of it.

[kiz_paws]

Yes, this poem made me think. :)
Nicely done, Cacian.

[cacian]

I couldn´t agree more to the beginning of your poem, cacian. But I´m not sure about the end of it.

hello Danik and sorry about the late reply.
the end is rather jerky I admit but what I meant is that love can turn failure to become realia. something positive to learn from.

[cacian]

Yes, this poem made me think. :)
Nicely done, Cacian.

thank you kiz for reading :)

[Danik 2016]

hello Danik and sorry about the late reply.
the end is rather jerky I admit but what I meant is that love can turn failure to become realia. something positive to learn from.

Thanks, cacian, I see!