Silences

[Delta40]

You call me a friend
as I ponder the wonders
of silence;
its tang wafts across the room
like an orange blossom deodorizer,
masking the s hit you dump
on the kitchen table
at the end of a working man's day.

When my turn comes to unload,
disgust vomits into my lap.
You say I stink,
then flee
leaving me
wrapped in a
new kind of silence.

[YesNo]

I liked how you described the silence broken by two people dumping on each other.

[Danik 2016]

Original description of presence x absence.
Fine to see you posting again, Delta.

[Jerrybaldy]

Loved the inclusion of the orange blossom deodoriser