sweet

[cacian]

when life
is sweet
it is a sugar treat
there is a buzz about a
feast
nature's especial breeze
cool as well as freeze
everything
you may feel decrease
hope happyness or elite
and abundance is the name
of the least
never once felt
so pleased
to repeat it is released

[PeterL]

Jolly good
Only someone as sweet as you could have written that. It makes me want to lick ice cream off you.

[Danik 2016]

Please more respect Peter L.!!

Cacian, I liked the beginning very much:
"when life
is sweet
it is a sugar treat" I got a bit confused with that "pf"

[YesNo]

I think "pf", that Danik noticed, should be "of". Nice sweet sound.

[cacian]

thank you all very much for reading and feedback :)
Danick that was an of speeling error as YesNo pointed it out :)