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jhnkn
04-11-2017, 03:46 PM
I kinda crashed around here some time ago
And didn't know if I should give it a go -
Insecurity and such low self-esteem
Made me think writing was just a dream.

So, I'm giving it a go here and now, because I want some honest opinions, constructive or destructive critique on a blog I got back to after quite some time.

Don't know if I should link it here or not, but www.johnsinsights.wordpress.com ; and if there's anyone that end up there and reads something, please give me some feedback, would really appreciate it.

Thank you for your time!

Dreamwoven
04-12-2017, 03:18 AM
Just a quick warning, LitNet is much quieter this year than normal. Hope you get a response. I had a careful read of the post and can see it has potential. You write well, it seems to be an interesting post. I found it it difficult to understand what you were getting at, so I hope others will give you feedback.