An Apology

[JonathanManley]

Washed up jelly fish
on a gravel beach
beneath
a chalky sky.
The plastic spade
in my nine year old hand
made a pudding of you.
I apologise.

[SleepyWitch]

Washed up jelly fish
on a gravel beach
beneath
a chalky sky.
The plastic spade
in my nine year old hand
made a pudding of you.
I apologise.

A very Haiku-like description. I like the unpretentious style of this.

[roncool]

Nice poem. Short style yet effective. Keep writing more.

[Jerrybaldy]

Sweet regret. I've always sign posted you as one to read.