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[ralphboats]

and so paul smart approached the river and his foot was hurting and he held his bible and he said to himself he was so fortunate to be alive this
tired in the head the man approached the city the foot was better and the bible was back by the river and his face covered so many tears were there he fragile and the tears yes the tears there falling
essence was the name of the city paul needed a new text he asked a man to offer a room and the man offered a room a good bed new text

[Zudonim3]

10/10 would read again

[Grit]

10/10 would read again

Is this sarcastic? 10 out of 10 is literally the 'perfect score.' Did the lack of punctuation, grammar and discernible story say 'perfect' to you? LOL gave me a good chuckle, though I still can't tell if serious.


In essence, it appears like you're laboriously describing the inane drivel that is the human subconscious attempting to make sense of what no sense can be made of.

I was thoroughly bored and made tired by this lengthy and pointless soliloquy.

This one made me laugh too! You're either really funny or really confused.

[Danik 2016]

and so paul smart approached the river and his foot was hurting and he held his bible and he said to himself he was so fortunate to be alive this
tired in the head the man approached the city the foot was better and the bible was back by the river and his face covered so many tears were there he fragile and the tears yes the tears there falling
essence was the name of the city paul needed a new text he asked a man to offer a room and the man offered a room a good bed new text
You seem not to be native in English. There are mistakes but there is also a poetic touch in it. One can see the man approaching the city.