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Mohammad Ahmad
01-27-2017, 09:06 AM
Just a time and memory
It comes again
Flouring deeply into my mind
It would be a flour cave
To Sodom and Bible
To the saturated grassy ground
And to valleys around
To my dead inspirited soul hatches
Small pigeon nestlings
And a shadow of an empty sieve
Withdrew into a foxlike trail
Flocking together like sneer wreathed mouthed
Jittering fluently into a deep voice
And comes again at an astonishing time
To pour down its salts and faking intonation
Around the injury flatting of emotion
Curbing each one soul to be smoothed
Then it will be soothed
At that destiny of the non-fated Human
From her braid she donates me a hair.
That's a link to my future
I never had a past
But I had future

Dreamwoven
01-27-2017, 09:53 AM
This is very moving!

YesNo
01-27-2017, 10:44 AM
I liked the last four lines the best. I don't understand how the title fits, but I only vaguely remember the story of Sodom.

Mohammad Ahmad
01-27-2017, 12:44 PM
I liked the last four lines the best. I don't understand how the title fits, but I only vaguely remember the story of Sodom.
Really you vaguely remember the story of Sodom but I really know that I am not the tongue of mine but to all nations and civilizations whether at ancient or now.
The story of Sodom and the flour cave a cave alongside a river that has walls like the flour so I took from this white material a background of my imaginations to say flouring deeply into my mind remembering and comparing between ancient and now while God has punished millions of people and dynasties due to His act. Now we never notice like such punishment of God but our life has been changed to be more unstable and always feeling lacking to satisfaction thus I changed a whole shift of my mind to ever neglect the past and as a new day, you are a new man.
I thank you always because you always saying the truth and to dark you would be saying dark as well as to discriminate between dark and the clear ideas.