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cacian
01-16-2017, 02:42 PM
dream to dream
visuals to a realm
and let the voice stream
loud
to a higher end
quiet
for silence is a triumph
and life a musical
science

Danik 2016
01-16-2017, 07:05 PM
I loved the ending very much:
"silence is a triumph
and life a musical
science"

YesNo
01-16-2017, 09:30 PM
I liked the "musical science" at the end as well. Nice sound to the poem overall.

cacian
01-19-2017, 07:48 AM
thank you Danik and YesNo. :)