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Leopard
12-14-2016, 08:16 AM
I'm rather ignorant when it comes to poetry so this is likely a stupid question, but why is free verse considered verse? Isn't verse distinguished from prose by its adherence to a meter and/or rhyme scheme? It seems to me like you can just take any random bit of prose, arrange it into lines, and call it free verse.

YesNo
12-14-2016, 10:24 AM
I like to partition the domain of texts into four, not two, parts: (1) poetry, (2) prose, (3) poetry and prose, (4) neither poetry nor prose.

Then one can partition each of these parts into two more: (1) meaningful, (2) not meaningful. One could also split them into (1) interesting, (2) not interesting.

I agree with your definition of "poetry". It should be the category where sound dominates, that is, texts where meter, rhyme, alliteration and whatever else is used to keep the reader's attention.

The problem with a lot of poetry, and this includes even metrical, non-free verse, poetry, is that it is "not meaningful" which makes it usually "not interesting".

Leopard
12-14-2016, 11:09 AM
I like to partition the domain of texts into four, not two, parts: (1) poetry, (2) prose, (3) poetry and prose, (4) neither poetry nor prose.

Then one can partition each of these parts into two more: (1) meaningful, (2) not meaningful. One could also split them into (1) interesting, (2) not interesting.

I agree with your definition of "poetry". It should be the category where sound dominates, that is, texts where meter, rhyme, alliteration and whatever else is used to keep the reader's attention.

The problem with a lot of poetry, and this includes even metrical, non-free verse, poetry, is that it is "not meaningful" which makes it usually "not interesting".

Neither poetry nor prose? I can't see what would fit under that label other than perhaps an incoherent bunch of characters. And the other two distinctions seem too subjective to me.

wolffg
12-14-2016, 11:29 AM
Free verse usually refers to poetry in contrast to both prose and traditional poetry in rhyme and meter. Modern poetry, in English beginning about 1912, differs from traditional poetry in many ways. A few poets like Hopkins, Dickinson, and Whitman, wrote modern free-verse poetry in the 1900s.

DeeKaah
12-14-2016, 12:03 PM
Free verse usually refers to poetry in contrast to both prose and traditional poetry in rhyme and meter. Modern poetry, in English beginning about 1912, differs from traditional poetry in many ways. A few poets like Hopkins, Dickinson, and Whitman, wrote modern free-verse poetry in the 1900s.

I assume you mean 1800s :P

I've always considered the reason that free verse became so popular was due to its unconventional nature. Until the 19th century, pretty much every poet wrote in iambic pentameter. Whitman once released a version of Leaves of Grass where he used iambic pentameter, just to show that he could in fact use it, he just didn't want to. To be so unconventional naturally drew criticism, but over time those works have come to be some of the most appreciated works of poetry out there.

Leopard
12-14-2016, 01:19 PM
I assume you mean 1800s :P

I've always considered the reason that free verse became so popular was due to its unconventional nature. Until the 19th century, pretty much every poet wrote in iambic pentameter. Whitman once released a version of Leaves of Grass where he used iambic pentameter, just to show that he could in fact use it, he just didn't want to. To be so unconventional naturally drew criticism, but over time those works have come to be some of the most appreciated works of poetry out there.

I'm not disputing that free verse can be good, but I don't really see how it's different from good prose.

YesNo
12-14-2016, 06:25 PM
Neither poetry nor prose? I can't see what would fit under that label other than perhaps an incoherent bunch of characters. And the other two distinctions seem too subjective to me.

It does seem like an odd category, but I would put dictionaries, lists, maps, mathematical equations as well as good, old-fashioned gibberish in that category.

JCamilo
12-14-2016, 10:16 PM
Free verse does not follow a metric pattern, but does have rythim, just this rythim is not a regular/traditional form. Just read Whitman, even the bad Whitman is rythimic.

Dreamwoven
12-15-2016, 04:00 AM
This is a reasonable definition, as far as I can see:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse

YesNo
12-15-2016, 10:56 AM
This is a reasonable definition, as far as I can see:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse

The reference to "spaced prose" in a reference to William Morrison Patterson in that link seems interesting. However, that space metaphor is confusing since language is something people hear not see. At least that is how I relate to language in general. I have to sound out the words for them to have meaning even though the sound is only performed in my head. I don't visualize a word in my mind neither as a text nor as an image.

There is something wrong with free verse. It doesn't use meter, but it does use line breaks and other formatting but restricting that formatting to what an early 20th century typewriter could perform. Why not get rid of the line breaks as well or expand the formatting to include font choice and size? Would it then be confused with prose or gibberish?

JCamilo
12-15-2016, 12:33 PM
Again, Free verse does not mean absence of rythim (or watever it is called to replace metre by modern poets), it is absence of rythim pattern. If you consider Song of Myself as Free verse, you will see the obvious rythim.

YesNo
12-15-2016, 04:11 PM
The good thing about emphasizing rhythm is that it is something that is heard, even internally when we speak to ourselves, and not seen. However, prose has rhythm as well. So what distinguishes free verse from prose. We are back to the original question.

JCamilo
12-16-2016, 07:36 AM
Well, you have different things, verse, prose, poems, poetry. You can define verse as one of the unities of a poem (the specific definition), you will not have such problem. You also can say, Poetry is something different from poems and can be used in prose. The famous prose poems are exactly the mix between poems and prose, the two different forms, neither prose or a poem, but both at sametime.

Noy
01-10-2017, 05:27 AM
Well, 'verse' means 'a line,' so even Whitman's poems possess a line. Free is free - do anything you want I guess - hence, the nomenclature. Still, I get your point, for the name is a conundrum: how can a poem be free when a poem is ipso facto an ordered structure. Sometimes reality cannot be adequately explained via language as the Sophists learned. It is just a name whose function is mere differentiation.

YesNo
01-10-2017, 06:56 AM
Until a culture is able to write the poem down, there isn't even a line. Only a sound pattern that people in that culture hear.

sandy14
02-11-2017, 04:58 PM
Free verse is the name to the structure. There is no rhyme scheme, and no fixed form - such as a sonnet, or a haiku.

However, that does not mean that the poem is devoid of rhythm or sound devices - just that they may not be at the end of the line.

Poetry (such as concrete poetry) may use a visual patterns instead of, or in addition to sound patterns. Free verse still contains internal rhymes, alliteration, repitition and some end of line rhymes and word choices to give specific sounds or meanings, but not necessarily in a consistent pattern.

The verse is an ordered structure - but it is a structure that is not dictated to by a specific form.

We can identify a sonnet, haiku or limerick through its form. Free verse means the absence of a set form, but not necessarily the absence of poetic techniques.

YesNo
02-12-2017, 09:59 AM
I wonder where the concept "prose poem" fits in all of this?

JCamilo
02-13-2017, 07:37 AM
It does not. Prose poem is not about the form and it is also about using rythim to write, just in prose (there is also some extra about the language). The point is, today you do not need to call anything "Prose poem" to indicate the use of poetic rythim, style, language in prose, as many prose writers just do it.

YesNo
02-13-2017, 11:11 AM
If prose contains poetic rhythm, style and language how does verse differ from it? I do think the term "prose poem" is inappropriate. It is just prose.

JCamilo
02-13-2017, 12:54 PM
Verse is not "what contains rythim, style or language". Verse is a line that contains elements of poetry. A prose poem does is not writen using this linear unity. That is the difference.

Obviously, however created the term was questioning the deffinition of poetry, prose and poems. With this he suggests those terms may be linked, mixed, but they are no always clear. At this point, anyone can understand the expression, so it is a bit of pointless saying it is not proper.

YesNo
02-13-2017, 08:34 PM
So verse depends on it being written? The only place one will find a "line" is on the page. Otherwise all one has is sound.

Danik 2016
02-13-2017, 09:21 PM
I liked this definition of prose poem:
"Though the name of the form may appear to be a contradiction, the prose poem essentially appears as prose, but reads like poetry.[...]While it lacks the line breaks associated with poetry, the prose poem maintains a poetic quality, often utilizing techniques common to poetry, such as fragmentation, compression, repetition, and rhyme. The prose poem can range in length from a few lines to several pages long, and it may explore a limitless array of styles and subjects."

https://www.poets.org/poetsorg/text/prose-poem-poetic-form

JCamilo
02-14-2017, 07:30 AM
So verse depends on it being written? The only place one will find a "line" is on the page. Otherwise all one has is sound.

Well, when you are talking about a writing unity, you depend on it being writen. Verse in oral form is also a unity - there is a break when someone is using the verse, but this definition is old and not the one addressed in written forms.

JCamilo
02-14-2017, 07:34 AM
I liked this definition of prose poem:
"Though the name of the form may appear to be a contradiction, the prose poem essentially appears as prose, but reads like poetry.[...]While it lacks the line breaks associated with poetry, the prose poem maintains a poetic quality, often utilizing techniques common to poetry, such as fragmentation, compression, repetition, and rhyme. The prose poem can range in length from a few lines to several pages long, and it may explore a limitless array of styles and subjects."

https://www.poets.org/poetsorg/text/prose-poem-poetic-form

My problem with this definition is that the difference is between prose and poetry as a matter of form and not a matter of language. Sure, sometimes you reffer to poetry as the same as a poem, but the whole point of the prose poem is that poetry is a matter of language, while prose and poem are a matter of form.

Danik 2016
02-14-2017, 08:20 AM
I se what you mean. But language is a trait of form too even if today itīs all mixed up and a cake receipt can me made into a poem.
My problem is: what would be the difference between a prose poem and the poetic prose of for example James Joyce or Guimarães Rosa. The lengt of the text, its general aspect, the lyrical or narrative purpose, all these things taken together...?

JCamilo
02-14-2017, 09:18 AM
It is not different. Joyce was a reader of the french symbolists, Mallarmé and cia. You can call Finnegans Wake a huge prose poem. Rosa is of course in the same lineage and the use of prose for him is even more relevant, when you remember prose was a reference to dailly use of language and he does use the mineiręs quite well. (Ironically, last week i was reading the news Finnegans would get a new translation to portuguese here and the writer of the article called it a Prose Poem, I am sure many have did this).

YesNo
02-14-2017, 09:58 AM
For what it's worth, I find Finnegans Wake unreadable. I wonder how they will translate that into Portuguese.

JCamilo
02-14-2017, 12:00 PM
It will be the second translation, I didn't read the first one because I read Finnegans Wake in joyish. Obviously, I would have a bit of gag, that a perfect translation of Finnegans Wake wouldn't need to have anything to do with the original.

Danik 2016
02-14-2017, 02:50 PM
double post.

Danik 2016
02-14-2017, 02:57 PM
For what it's worth, I find Finnegans Wake unreadable. I wonder how they will translate that into Portuguese.
I agree, it is a very difficult read, you have to have time and concentration. But it is fascinating too. It is a kind of literature that experiments with language, as mathematics experiment with combinations of numbers.

And I believe it is a different book for each reader that attempts to read it. It depends of which of Joyceīs references are famililiar to the reader.For example I read some pages and had only a very faint idea about what it was about. A friend of mine knew Irish folklore. His reading was much more complete than mine.
Another had no difficulty in selecting a striking passage:
"(bababadalgharaghtakamminarronnkonnbronntonnerronn tuonnthunntro
varrhounawnskawntoohoohoordenenthurnuk!)".

Danik 2016
02-14-2017, 03:02 PM
It will be the second translation, I didn't read the first one because I read Finnegans Wake in joyish. Obviously, I would have a bit of gag, that a perfect translation of Finnegans Wake wouldn't need to have anything to do with the original.
Do you know who is the new translator,JC? Last year someone subscribed to LitNet claiming that he was a Joyce translator and I was very curious. But he disappeared again.

JCamilo
02-14-2017, 03:50 PM
http://alias.estadao.com.br/noticias/geral,finnegans-wake-a-nova-traducao,10000098586

O outro tradutor era o Caetano Galindo.

Danik 2016
02-14-2017, 07:05 PM
Thanks, JC. I vaguely remember the name of Galindo, I donīt think it was he that registered in the forum last year.
I donīt know the lady, but Iluminuras is a good editor.
I prefer reading the original though. In that kind of translation so much can get lost or changed.

JCamilo
02-15-2017, 08:34 AM
In the case of Finnegans, any translation is complicated, after all, Joyce combination of different languages is near impossible to achive.

YesNo
02-15-2017, 08:56 AM
Finnegans Wake might be a good one to let Google translate. The English words that can be recognized would be translated over and the other stuff left the way it is.

If I could only get Google to translate that book into English first, I might be able to read it.

Danik 2016
02-15-2017, 09:31 AM
I think there probably are Google translations of the book in the web.
The point is IMO, the complexity of the text is not aleatory. It is a meaningful although complex work. The problem is that its complexity limits its accessibility.
That is why I like to compare it to a mathematical construction.
To an outsider like myself, an equation looks like an complicated and unecessary play with numbers destined only to make school children suffer.
But to a Mathematician it certainly makes sense.

Danik 2016
02-15-2017, 09:32 AM
Double again

YesNo
02-15-2017, 10:47 AM
It's true that both a mathematical text and Finnegans Wake are difficult for some people to understand. However, that is where their similarity ends.

Theoretically anyone can read a mathematical text (or other scientific text) and understand it. They will even be able to come to an agreement with others what the text actually said without ambiguity. It just takes learning the technical vocabulary. It is a lot like reading a program for a computer someone has written. It can be done if one learns the technical language of the program which can be very boring and not worth doing. I only know a very few such technical languages. There is no technical language to learn that will let me read Finnegans Wake if I am willing to spend the time to learn that language. True, there are pieces of information that might help me guess what Joyce is saying, but that is all it would be in the end--a guess. Others would disagree with me.

I have enjoyed some of Joyce's writing. The first part of Ulysses comes to mind as very enjoyable writing. I suppose I might be able to finish Ulysses but it gets very cryptic. I don't think that I would be able to read Finnegans Wake. That book reminds me of talking with someone who has a mental illness or someone who is being deliberately perverse trying to make sure I do not understand what is being said. I can forgive the person with a mental illness, but when I know a person is deliberately trying to make me not understand I view it as verbal abuse. Some poetry is written like this. I discuss poems with a few friends. We read each others work and give comments. Most of them I can comment on constructively, but a few seem to think that writing a poem is meant to be an act of non-communication. I want to give them a comment. They would be offended if I did not give them a comment, but I have no clue what they said.

Danik 2016
02-15-2017, 12:25 PM
I see what you mean and your own poems are very transparent.
But some types of poetry are more cryptic than others and can be read in several ways. Sometimes even every day prose. I have a German internet aquaintance who comunicates though links.
He wants people to infer what he wants to say. I love to read his comercial letter because they are "normal comunication".

YesNo
02-15-2017, 03:02 PM
I was thinking more about how a mathematics text and Finnegans Wake might be related now that you've mentioned it, Danik. There is a way this might work that I didn't think of before. Perhaps Joyce intended his text to be "meaningless", basically something just to look at, but not read in the way we normally read for meaning.

The reason there might be a link is because during the early 20th century there was a dream that mathematics could be mechanized to the point that human beings were not needed to develop it. This resulted in "mathematics" being a set of symbols or texts which a human being would not read, but a machine would generate. The symbols were to have no meaning. In contrast to this mathematics was "metamathematics" which was a way to make what the machine generated useful to us.

This mechanization is not a bad thing. There is a lot of tedious computation in mathematics that a machine does better. Much of the interest in fractals today is because computers have visualized these for us. Also mechanization is good in many other contexts. I prefer having a machine wash my clothes and maybe in the future drive my car. The human chore of washing clothes has been "dehumanized" today. In the early 20th century, some hoped that mathematics could be dehumanized as well so that it could be done without any need for a human being to add meaning to the task. That dream was shown to be impossible by Godel, Church and Turing.

It is possible, but I don't know any of the history about Joyce, that he was aiming to create a "dehumanized" story that did not require human beings to understand it. I would still think one would need a "metastory" that would explain the meaningless story to a human being. If that is what Joyce was trying to do, then what Google outputs as a translation should be adequate. All of that is just speculation on my part. I don't know what Joyce thought he was trying to achieve.

Danik 2016
02-15-2017, 09:51 PM
I think it was the other way round, Yes/No, he wanted to write a text with several layers of meanings. Joyce and other writers of the 20 C were adept of experimental literature. The important thing for them was not only what they wanted to say but how they would say it. They experimented with form, exploring different meanings of words and languages, often inventing their own grammar and their own sintax, thus creating multiple levels of significance.
Here are some interpretations of the first sentence of the text:
"Riverrun, past Eve and Adam's, from swerve of shore to bend of bay, brings us by a commodius vicus of recirculation back to Howth Castle and Environs."
http://www.antimoon.com/forum/t6441.htm
I think that among other things, probably all those interpretations make sense, the sentence refers to the complex movement of the text itself, like the great river of human tradition which started with Adam and Eve, but also that smaller Dublin river they refer to that passes the Church of Adam and Eve. And he is warning that it is a circular and ciclic narrative where there will be repetitions. The great pulse of life including the smaller cicles of human lives and among them this Finnegan.
Yes, I think it has a "metastory" level, but the idea seems to be to defamiliarize the usual concepts of narrative, text and language.

JCamilo
02-16-2017, 07:49 AM
Saying it is mathematical is just a metaphor. It is fine, but we should not be picking at straws. It is not meant to be a perfect relation, just a suggestive one.

Also, Finnegans Wake and Joyce - despite the huge problem the language itself in the work is for us - is hardly the only text that people read and cann't come with a meaning that is not ambiguous or agree with that. This works with Kafka, which style is very simple, yet there is no agreement in the world about the exactly meaning. And hardly something unread in art. Music for example (and since Finnegans Wake is a experimetation with sounds, it is very appropriate to remind of music) is not meant even to be decoded and understood to be enjoyed.

YesNo
02-16-2017, 12:08 PM
If Finnegans Wake intentionally had layers of meaning then it would not be related to what mathematicians hoped to achieve in the early 20th century. So my guess was wrong. They hoped that mathematics would be able to be constructed unconsciously, once and for all, by a machine and have no meaning whatsoever. "No meaning" and "layers of meaning" are opposite goals. The "metamathematics" texts would contain the inevitable layers of meaning that arise when different people read those texts over and over again each time a little differently.

The reason mathematicians wanted to remove human subjectivity from mathematics was to remove those layers of meaning that will inevitably occur when a human being is confronted with any text. If a machine (not a theoretically conscious AI robot) constructs mathematics it is like a washing machine doing the laundry. The clean clothes are the "mathematics". The human being wearing those clothes enjoys meaningful "metamathematics".

All stories, as I see it, contain potential layers of meaning which are recreated by the subjectivity of the conscious human being while reading the text. If a reader does not understand what an author wrote, the reader will make up meanings for the text which could be simply that the author is mentally ill or verbally abusive depending on how hostile the reader is toward that author.

JCamilo
02-16-2017, 01:20 PM
Or they will say, as I once saw, that Voltaire in Candide wanted to postpone the idea that Ignorance is a Bliss. Voltaire defending Ignorance.

The easier way to say, is that the meaning construction is not sole dependent on the artwork/text, but in a interation with other chains of significance. They have a meaning (positive, valid, even if wrong).

It is also notable, the idea a text have layers and layers of meaning is old and the idea Finnegans Wake cannot be understood because of the language is different from Joyce word-plays has no logic (it has, more close to music, a language very few people can understand).

Danik 2016
02-16-2017, 09:36 PM
"All stories, as I see it, contain potential layers of meaning which are recreated by the subjectivity of the conscious human being while reading the text. If a reader does not understand what an author wrote, the reader will make up meanings for the text which could be simply that the author is mentally ill or verbally abusive depending on how hostile the reader is toward that author."
I agree with you and Camilo that the text depends on the interaction with the reader. But some texts permit a greater quantity of interpretation than others. Personally I prefer texts that defy me. Finnegans Wake is an extreme case, maybe the most extreme case there is.
Of course one must consider also the musicality of a poetic text. There is the flow of FW, the running of the river of words. But only musicality is not enough for me.

JCamilo
02-16-2017, 10:09 PM
i would suggest there is a difference between having many possible interpretatitions and having many possible layers of interpretations. Its necessary a special kind of interation to allow you go for all the chain inside those layers, most people can only go as far to pass the literal layer to a metaphorical or moral level, in a very basic way.

YesNo
02-16-2017, 11:39 PM
I like to separate the text itself from meaning. The text is objective. Meaning is subjective. The text is ink on paper or bits in some computer memory. No meaning is stored there. Meaning only exists when a human being reads the text. It vanishes once the human forgets what was read. The next time the human reads the text a new meaning is created. My motivation for this is to make sure a computer is not considered conscious by simply manipulating texts. See Searle's Chinese Room thought experiment.

So the layers of interpretations or interpretations or anything to do with meaning don't exist until there is a human being who creates them. This is going to make the meaning of the text relative to the human being doing the reading, but we are communal beings and so we can more or less agree on the meanings we experience when reading a text.

I only mention the above to see if either of you agree with that.

JCamilo
02-17-2017, 07:35 AM
The text is neither objective or subjective, it is nothing. It is like saying a chair is objective. You are talking about an object. A symbol is always conected with his meanings - and meaning is different from interpretation and the meaning of a symbol only exists as process of interpretation of someone else.. I also would say every meaning is objective (even if wrong). In semiotics (semiology, depending the side of atlantic) everything is a process. There are parts, but they need to work together. Futhermore, the word "chair" has (several) meanings, all of them depend on the interaction - you must not forget there is two humans in this process. The "author" is also responsable for interpretations.

Take the example I gave about Candide and Voltaire. A person considered that the meaning of the text is "Ignorance is a bliss". His conclusion was objective: a literal interpretation of the text allows this. It is wrong, because he failed to consider the use of irony, he had no information about voltaire, etc. His interpretation is not subjective (nor we should claim that because the interpretation depends on personal background that is is subjective), nor it was mine. Of course, someone's reaction to a text may be guided by emotions rather than be analytical. Also, while all interpretations are personal (so subjective, even if logical, but in this case not the oposite of objective), all meanings of symbols are also variable according the context. So i think it is a bit pointless to bring this difference.

We have also texts that are ambiguous - Nothing better than Dante - and will have several meanings because he build the texts that way and with this will allow several interpretations.

Danik 2016
02-17-2017, 07:44 AM
Not quite, Yes/No. I think the written word also carries its load of meaning according to several factors like the language and the country in which it was produced, the background of the writer, the density of the text itself (its layers of significance- for example some texts are just read on a literal level, others, usually literary texts are open to several interpretation).
I believe good literary texts have a kind of life and a history of their own. What, for example, would make a Shakespeare or a Cervantes text survive so many centuries?

YesNo
02-17-2017, 08:39 AM
Just so you know what motivates my questions: I want to make sure that a computer manipulating texts is not considered conscious just because of this manipulation, that is, the computer is not manipulating "meaning", only texts.

However, I normally think of a text as "meaningful" or not as a text, but I think that is a cultural mistake that I make and so I am trying on the opposite idea: no text is meaningful in itself.

Both of you mentioned the author or writer, but the writer could be a computer. For example, the computer could generate a random number and that number linked to a set of strings that would be the subject of the sentence. In a similar way a verb could be selected and then perhaps an object. Now we have a sentence. A human being reads the computer generated sentence: "I eat bread." When does this text become "meaningful"? I would say the text becomes meaningful only when a human reads it (or writes it or thinks it).

What I think both of you are saying is that meaning is something shared. I agree with that. It is not something peculiar to me as an individual when I read the text. Then we ask ourselves, if meaning is shared, where is this meaning that we all can see and agree upon? We are tempted to say that meaning is in the text because a text is easy to point to, but is that correct? We don't have to write down everything that has meaning. We could just be talking to each other and use sound? In that case is meaning in the sound waves? I would think it is not there either and yet we agree enough on the meaning of the words and so it is not something only I or only you know.

Danik 2016
02-17-2017, 10:50 AM
"Just so you know what motivates my questions: I want to make sure that a computer manipulating texts is not considered conscious just because of this manipulation, that is, the computer is not manipulating "meaning", only texts."
I certainly would not consider a computer conscious in any way. To my mind a computer is a machine like a car or a fridge that merely does what it is programmed to and instructed to do and it is widely subject to mechanical and eletrical failings. In certain distopical context (inumerous roboter films I would say) computers and specially roboters are treated as if they were independent beings with an own conciousness and an own will power. This exalting of computers and roboters (which in itself is a cultural factor) reminds me of the story of Frankenstein, which is the result of the 19 C fear of creating uncontrolable monsters in laboratory. From there to now what one notices is that the human monsters are conceived in the usual way.
I donīt think it totally impossible to think of an self concious and self suficient machine that gets out of the control of its creators. But I think it very very difficult to happen at the present moment.

JCamilo
02-17-2017, 12:47 PM
Well, are you talking about a computer just randomly selecting words until he finds an order that we can understand? In this case, the person responsable for the creation of such computer/program is concious and just created an technique/toll for writting, which i suspect is too little effective.

Let's just remember, language itself was born from us giving meaning to things are unconcious - nature occurences, for example. Language is not exactly logical (how it is born and developed).

We don't need a meaning to agree and perhaps we do not need a correct meaning. Think how many cultural creations are born from our "Mistakes". The entire, magical scene of Moses parting the red sea is a mistake, for example. For years, people understood Moby Dick just as a sea adventure novel. it was wrong. Proust used to say the writer is born from the moment the reader dies, because he starts trying to tell the story or give a meaning that is his own. This flexibitily is the root of all art. Think about: We have no idea about the smile of Monalisa, yet, it gave us a lot to think about. To create about.

Obviously, when we are strictly talking about a literary study, we will do a selection. We have our bias. But I suggest to avoid "you cannot do it" to "it is good what you did?".

YesNo
02-17-2017, 07:38 PM
I guess what I am trying to do by removing meaning from the text or sound waves is to place it in some sort of consciousness "field" that we use when we communicate. The existence of this field or whatever would ground any psi ability we had as well as allow us to communicate with each other through language.

The robot would not have access to this field because the robot is not conscious, but only has access to texts or sound waves. These texts and sound waves are traces left by this field, but they are not the field itself. Those texts and sound waves would be the data needed to fit a model that the robot uses to interpret our communication and attempt to join in our conversation. The strong AI proponent would say that that is all we are doing as well, but is it?

One could modify Proust's comment by saying that the act of reading rewrites the story unless one is a robot. If one is a robot the act of reading optimizes a response to the stimulus given by the text or sound wave.

Danik 2016
02-17-2017, 08:04 PM
I find these data part a bit difficult to grasp. If communication is reduced to "scripts ", algorytms and sound waves I fear that all cultural elements that are not strictly technological are eliminated.

YesNo
02-18-2017, 03:50 AM
We are a little far from the topic of why does free verse count as verse.

Danik 2016
02-18-2017, 07:18 AM
Lol! I should say so!
I guess it all started with the reflection of a text having one or several meanings or no meaning at all.

YesNo
02-18-2017, 09:57 AM
I didn't realize I had a position on something like that until I wrote it down.

Danik 2016
02-18-2017, 07:47 PM
And I never thought about a computer being eventually able to produce literature.

JCamilo
02-18-2017, 11:05 PM
My computer produces literature everyday ;)

YesNo
02-19-2017, 12:14 AM
The computer manipulates texts and metaphorically "reads" them, but only a human can give the text meaning since texts don't intrinsically have any meaning. I think that's my position. Which means there must be some level of consciousness above us that allows us to participate in meaningfulness. The position is holistic rather than mechanistic.

I was thinking today about what the OP was really saying about free verse when asking if it counted as verse. When I read what he/she wrote I think it might have something to do with verbal abuse that I mentioned in an earlier post to this thread. I would rethink the question like this: Is free verse verbal abuse?

Now, I like some free verse, so I would answer: Sometimes it doesn't work for me, that is, when looking through my consciousness to find some link to meaning I don't find any. When it doesn't work I ask myself "Is it me or the author?" Practically speaking, it is always me since I can't do anything about the author except whine about it and not read the text.

Danik 2016
02-19-2017, 07:25 AM
My computer produces literature everyday ;)

Come on, JC, you know what I mean!;)
Your computer doesnīt produce anything on its own accord.
You (or whoever uses your PC for that purpose) produces literature on your computer as you would do it on an typewriter or paper in other times.
Else we would be at the starting point of this argument again.

Danik 2016
02-19-2017, 07:32 AM
"I was thinking today about what the OP was really saying about free verse when asking if it counted as verse. When I read what he/she wrote I think it might have something to do with verbal abuse that I mentioned in an earlier post to this thread. I would rethink the question like this: Is free verse verbal abuse?"
I donīt think so, Yes/No. I reread the post, it seems to be about of the form of the verse.
https://literarydevices.net/free-verse/
Well, unless everybody is joking today.

YesNo
02-19-2017, 04:51 PM
On the "literal" level, the OP is asking a question about form as you say. Here's the OP:


I'm rather ignorant when it comes to poetry so this is likely a stupid question, but why is free verse considered verse? Isn't verse distinguished from prose by its adherence to a meter and/or rhyme scheme? It seems to me like you can just take any random bit of prose, arrange it into lines, and call it free verse.

Note the qualifications "I'm rather ignorant" and "this is likely a stupid question". I read that as irony. Then note "you can just take any random bit of prose". The irony is turning into sarcasm with the "any random" part, but not on the surface, not literally. I agree that Leopard probably doesn't see free verse as "verbal abuse", but he probably hasn't thought of it as such.

Regardless, here is a good example of two people reading the same text and creating different meanings in the process. And if Leopard joined the discussion he might recreate a third meaning to what he wrote. Even my assumption that Leopard is a "he" is assigning meaning to some text that is not there. I can see why early 20th century mathematicians did not want human involvement in mathematics.

Danik 2016
02-19-2017, 05:11 PM
You may be right, Yes/No. In fact I donīt know the OP, so I canīt say if there is any irony.
When I am not sure of the writers intention I always make a point of taking the text literally.
The most that can happen is that the writer will take me for ingenuous or stupid, and I think I can survive that coming from an avatar. On the other hand, if I atribute an irony that is not there I may create an unnecessary misunderstanding.
As an internet aquaintance of mine says, written irony is so much more difficult to detect than the verbal.

YesNo
02-19-2017, 05:22 PM
I agree that written irony is difficult to detect. With the verbal you can see the person. I suspect facial expression adds a lot to the communication.

Danik 2016
02-19-2017, 07:17 PM
It sure does. Well, maybe the OP will state his intention - or not.

siobankelley
04-17-2017, 12:28 PM
You may be confusing pentameter with verse. Poetry is sometimes written inside a regimented structure, example: Shakespeare wrote predominantly I Iambic Pentameter. Each line has 5 feet/10syllables however you prefer to count it. There's also terza-rima, quatrain, sestina, etc Each has specific rules that govern the structure. Verse poetry is poetry that has both a consistent meter and a rhyme scheme. Blank verse is poetry based on unrhymed lines and a definite meter, usually of iambic pentameter. Both blank verse and free verse are free from rhyme scheme. Hope that helps.

Dreamwoven
09-01-2017, 07:00 AM
You may be confusing pentameter with verse. Poetry is sometimes written inside a regimented structure, example: Shakespeare wrote predominantly I Iambic Pentameter. Each line has 5 feet/10syllables however you prefer to count it. There's also terza-rima, quatrain, sestina, etc Each has specific rules that govern the structure. Verse poetry is poetry that has both a consistent meter and a rhyme scheme. Blank verse is poetry based on unrhymed lines and a definite meter, usually of iambic pentameter. Both blank verse and free verse are free from rhyme scheme. Hope that helps.

This was an interesting complication, which shows how difficult the whole issue is (except for experts). Thank you siobankelley!