amused

[cacian]

a personalty
crash
is down to a rash
one wishes brash
a reality trash

but to a personality
smash
a collective
stash

the more
seductive
the feeling
of receptive
and the less
refused the meaning
of enthused

one is amused
it is never confused

[Danik 2016]

I was missing your poems, cacian!
Interesting the harsh sound repetition:crash,brash,trash...

[Pompey Bum]

I always love Cacian's insistent rhymes. The clashing cymbals in this one are wonderful.

[YesNo]

Nice sound to this. I liked the third "stanza" the best if stanza is the correct word for it. Perhaps "part" is better.

[cacian]

thank you all so very much for such lovely feedback.
:)

[M4ngo]

Very nice! Honestly, really like your style and thoughts.