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BMistark
10-28-2016, 08:54 PM
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Second best never first that was the truth of love
Same difference myself I excepted this truth

Alone together and yet never connected
Altogether separate though love we do wish

Very little hope to discouraged men who seek
Virtual reality this game of love seems

Escaped prisoner, now free released from my chains
Emotional reasoning consumes my mind

Deafening silence is the roaring sound of love
Deliberate mistake love may be but not this time

Delta40
10-28-2016, 09:19 PM
Alone together and yet never connected.

Deafening silence is the roaring sound of love.

I wonder about the veracity of these lines. A compelling poem. Thank you.

BMistark
10-28-2016, 10:14 PM
I am glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading. ��