loyalty

[cacian]

the most
accute linear
of a mute
is to say nothing
in the face
of a feeling
nodding
and
the loud
is loving
the sound
of
a meaning
falling

there is character
in a fracas spalling

loyalty's
calling
it
evolves
even when
a word
disolves
because to be
told is gold

[desiresjab]

Try writing in your native language.

[Pompey Bum]

Gorgeous, Cacian. As always, each line defies convention and leads to an unexpected place. I love that about your poetry. It always takes me somewhere new.

[mona amon]

Cacian, I don't think I've ever mentioned it before but I love reading your poems. :)

[cacian]

Gorgeous, Cacian. As always, each line defies convention and leads to an unexpected place. I love that about your poetry. It always takes me somewhere new.

Pompey sorry about the delay so glad you liked this piece :)

[cacian]

Cacian, I don't think I've ever mentioned it before but I love reading your poems. :)

mona mona long time no seen hope you are well!!
and thank you for such a lovely comment )