lush

[cacian]

the joy of living
it brings me
tripping of the
finest kind
wishing sipping was
as lushious as time

[YesNo]

I liked the repeated sounds of the "i" in "living" contrasted with the sound of the "i" in "time".

[PeterL]

Wildflowers in a pleasant spot;
Birds chirping and fluting in mora;
Wine as smooth as a woman’s skin;
A joyful mood in a Summer day;
All are quite fine, but none as luscious as you.

[cacian]

thank you both very much :)