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angliholic
07-24-2016, 07:14 PM
Thank you, Heartwing,
for the lush and beautiful comment
you left on my writing
though it was at the moment
when spring breezes were blowing
no longer
and lotus flowers were seeding
in the pond yonder.
A while ago,
I clearly remember,
they were still
like young boys and girls
frolicking in the green plain.
It was you
that appeared with a summer rain
causing
numerous enthralling ripples
in my heart
when my hope was dying
and I was about to give up the art
of writing poetry.

heartwing
08-01-2016, 12:10 PM
Beautiful, angliholic. I might print this and frame it, close to one of the many bookshelves in my house. If something I've said has helped you write more of your beautiful material, I am so happy indeed. Maybe in that selfsame shelf will rest the book you will publish one day. I am glad to have found your words on this site no matter the future. May it rain in beautiful fields forever.