I am alone

[mahmod qabaga]

I am alone



step by step
following
your story
Mixing flowers that’s like you,
my parts dived to live in your sea
I am alone in my dream
looking to be a kid who swim in a river,
moving in you,
tell me how maps, differentiated from
your directions
and stars irrigated from your lights
to keep your feeling, your order
wipe your tears
Please
My queen
My young bird
My all life
You are a flower that mixed with my words
open your direction and give me your view
open your dictionary
and give me all your meaning
tell me about ashtar
to give you a love and
me
come in
closer and closer
to live
and give me breathing
of life
you are a poem that written a word by a word over my
soft formation
time by time
your word danced with my behavior
and jumped over my dream

[Danik 2016]

A beautiful poem, Mahmod, with very powerful images. If you permit, I would like to suggest it for the LitNet book we are trying to create.

[tailor STATELY]

(my interpretation of your beautiful poem)

I am afloat in your being
- your very mystery;
tending your garden
My soul immersed in your sea -
otherwise alone in this dream
Childlike, drifting
Seeking the way
through the starlight
that courses through your body
bringing order to your spirit
in harmony with my own
To wash away
what tears may come

Please
My beloved
My angel

All through my years
you are the lotus my words bring to life
Open your blossom and give me guidance
Open the lexicon of your heart
unto my understanding

Teach me of Ashtar
that you and I might love
and be as one

Come
Closer, ever closer
to live and bring me breath
You are the poem I craft
from divine foundation
one eternal round
Your words ever entwined with mine
transcending all dreams

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

[mahmod qabaga]

[QUOTE=Danik 2016;1323461]A beautiful poem, Mahmod, with very powerful images. If you permit, I would like to suggest it for the LitNet book we are trying to create.[/QU




dear poet Danik
thanks for you due your reading and your note and addition

with love

you can do as you wish

[Danik 2016]

Thanks Mahmod, but I'm no poet. The poets here are you and Taylor.

[Danik 2016]

(my interpretation of your beautiful poem)

I am afloat in your being
- your very mystery;
tending your garden
My soul immersed in your sea -
otherwise alone in this dream
Childlike, drifting
Seeking the way
through the starlight
that courses through your body
bringing order to your spirit
in harmony with my own
To wash away
what tears may come

Please
My beloved
My angel

All through my years
you are the lotus my words bring to life
Open your blossom and give me guidance
Open the lexicon of your heart
unto my understanding

Teach me of Ashtar
that you and I might love
and be as one

Come
Closer, ever closer
to live and bring me breath
You are the poem I craft
from divine foundation
one eternal round
Your words ever entwined with mine
transcending all dreams

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

A lovely poem Taylor and a eloquent dialogue between two diferent poetic traditions! I'm submiting both I hope they will be printed together if the book is really going to happen.

[mahmod qabaga]

A lovely poem Taylor and a eloquent dialogue between two diferent poetic traditions! I'm submitting both I hope they will be printed together if the book is really going to happen.

with pleasure my dear friend
thanks for all

[mahmod qabaga]

A lovely poem Taylor and a eloquent dialogue between two diferent poetic traditions! I'm submitting both I hope they will be printed together if the book is really going to happen.

with pleasure my dear friend
thanks for all

[caddy_caddy]

was the poem written in another language then translated to English ?

[mahmod qabaga]

was the poem written in another language then translated to English ?

i am Arabian poet
i have many writes in Arabic and few writes in English
this write is English not translated
thanks for your reading

[caddy_caddy]

pleasure to meet u .
It's good then to ask some friends here to help u with the language before posting it .
Regards,

[mahmod qabaga]

pleasure to meet u .
It's good then to ask some friends here to help u with the language before posting it .
Regards,

with pleasure

thanks