Between two things to choose!

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Mayest thou a figure of a deep conscience
Then in my ocean tripping up to eyes?
I so far was examined by your sick body
Since in each promise you showing lies
Give me a soul never smoked away
On each trail would calm and stay
Thou a figure can be never consulted
As a wind rustled day by day
Flicker on my window stop not nerving
Ho! The march would give me stepless moving
Thus as salty water becomes diminished
Once the water flows or for back running
A pair of wing was cut how to fly?
Roads are rugged to show further high
Between two things, which one is the confident?
That our crescent perhaps would lovely shy

[YesNo]

I don't know what this is about, so I only focused on the meter which seems like an attempt at iambic pentameter but it didn't sound close enough to it when I read it. Meter depends on how the reader pronounces the words and there are different dialects in which the meter or rhyme doesn't sound the same.

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Thank you YesNo for reading, analyzing and also critiquing, yes it is trying to reach the iambic ..just attempt
Now I think it is hardly to keep with iambic, either a failure on meter or on dialectic affects, so that I think it is difficult for contemporary poets going back for old poetry and could have enough controlling because they adapt themselves to the free verses ( neither rhyme nor meter)