obvious

[cacian]

what is real
might not
always be pleasing
but at least
it is teasing the very
meaning of
receiding
to be without receiving
and what is
the obvious
is never deceiving.

[Pompey Bum]

Bravo Cacian! You've really learned to use vowel sounds effectively since I last read your poetry. Well done! :)

[YesNo]

I don't understand what "receiding" means, but I like he sound of this.

[Dreamwoven]

I don't understand what "receiding" means, but I like he sound of this.
Means receiving, just a typo.

[Danik 2016]

Maybe "receding".
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/receding

[Dreamwoven]

So, cacian, what did you mean?

[cacian]

Bravo Cacian! You've really learned to use vowel sounds effectively since I last read your poetry. Well done! :)

salut Pompey !!and thank you for the lovely comment :)

[cacian]

I don't understand what "receiding" means, but I like he sound of this.

YesNo thank you for reading and receding means slowly disappearing or as in something not in receit of things.

[cacian]

Maybe "receding".
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/receding
that is the one but spelt with an I .


So, cacian, what did you mean?
to reced as in to be shortage or to slowly dissipate/disappear.