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Wilyem Clark
05-28-2016, 01:28 PM
No one is qualified
To judge poetry today;
So many efforts are mere
Waterfalls of words:
Pretty enough to glance at
On the bus one rainy day,
But too susceptible to droughts
That dry up all the meaning.

YesNo
05-29-2016, 08:49 AM
I like the drought metaphor at the end. Is there anything in particular you have in mind?